Must say you guys did a nice job together, simple story with many cameo's. That Vin panel made me lol alot Good luck to getting through to round 2

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Proud Supporter of the Falcon PAWNCH!

I'm a friend of Karma's I've been watching the round since the start...

So you have a very nice art style, I love how the actions goes in your comic.

Although you have Lin so very out of character, she isn't a very good listener. I was pondering there why she attacked Aiden as well. I realized though it's probably on that missing page, lol. So I tracked them down, silly me you know. One last thing...I thought only one of them could be a fighter?

I've been saving up my comments for the end. Just so you know I'm not trying to be mean. I only have a few questions, hell it's not like you even have to answer them. Anyway awesome pages.

*Doesn't use emo-things realized yesterday it makes her sound mean all the time.*

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It only seems I'm unpredictable to those who cannot predict the unpredictable, but to those who can predict the unpredictable I'm predictable.

Haha Dr your such a dork.

T___T Lin can be a good listener! And I like bonding over dead brothers.

But dude this is my fav page! oh and OMG you hit a girl!! lol technical...Nek is a guy but still. lol I like this page a lot

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Im going to open ketchup bottles with your face!! -Karma

Lawl also

Lin "Rachel, I am so no longer bonding over our dead siblings with you!"

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Im going to open ketchup bottles with your face!! -Karma

Pretty much. >>

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Ohmigod! They're fighting each other to the death!!!
.......Wanna go get some frozen yogurt?

Yah, if she hits first twice, there goes the unsaid 'don't hit girls' law.

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Ohmigod! They're fighting each other to the death!!!
.......Wanna go get some frozen yogurt?

Thanks, you too.

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Ohmigod! They're fighting each other to the death!!!
.......Wanna go get some frozen yogurt?

Well, Aiden was supposed to look threatening, I meant to include his gun poking out f his jacket but forgot. And the talking was my partner's idea, and she's talked to karma321 alot, so I just let her have at it.

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Ohmigod! They're fighting each other to the death!!!
.......Wanna go get some frozen yogurt?

All these spectacular updates I love this page. You have such great movement. And always remember to keep the visuals interesting and different. If you can do action, you can do anything! The last panel pwns. Period.